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Dive a little deeper *Critiques Welcomed*

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Literature Text

Walking into a deep abyss.
Overcome by the feeling
Of bliss

A world made of greatness
Oh how deep you can go
Endless

A life of color
A life of dreams
A life worth living
Without reality

Darkness no longer a threat
But a welcoming hand
Always present

Go deeper, you are almost there
Can't you see them
Don't despair

A life of color
A life of dreams
A life worth living
Without reality

You're looking too hard
Just trust your heart
And lower your guard

The darkness will grow deeper
But peer through it
My dreamer

A life of color
A life of dreams
A life worth living
You beautiful thing

Do you see it, that light
Can't you see it?
The pretty sight

It's you, though by your eyes, never seen
Everyone else does because
That's how bright
You gleam
Critiques welcomed. I just wrote this for no reason :3
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gryphonCodes's avatar
Beautiful! Your poem is perfect :)